Can I get some honest opinions on my design for a zip up

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Can I get some honest opinions on this zip up I designed

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Would like some honest opinions on this zip up I designed

A space for developing and discovering Startup and Emerging clothing brands. Self promotion is okay. Currently: Up to 4x/month, but not more than 1x/day. If it has been less than 24 hours, I am deleting your second one. I also delete posts with ALL CAPS in the title.

Would like some honest opinions for my first design

A space for developing and discovering Startup and Emerging clothing brands. Self promotion is okay. Currently: Up to 4x/month, but not more than 1x/day. If it has been less than 24 hours, I am deleting your second one. I also delete posts with ALL CAPS in the title.